You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Miya,
I am writing
this
letter regarding your invitation in
your country. I am planning to visit next month. Since I am going to stay a month there I need some suggestions related to gifts, favourite activities and ,of course, good food options in your country.
First of all, I will be Change preposition
to
exited
to give presents to your parents because it will be the first time to meet with your family. I am going to take some kitchen sets but if you have another idea, please, share it with me
Correct your spelling
excited
Secondly
, Although
I have some information about Venice and its beautiful and unique sightseeings
, I have no idea which one is best and where I can go. Fix the agreement mistake
sightseeing
Therefore
, I would be pleased if you share
your favourite ones. Wrong verb form
shared
Moreover
, if you give some details about clothes which are suit next month and the weather, it will be your
favour.
Change preposition
in your
Additionally
, the meals are also
really important because you know your cuisine are
extremely Correct subject-verb agreement
is
differ
from ours.
I am looking forward to Replace the word
different
take
your response letter as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
Yulduz Otajonova.Verb problem
receiving
Submitted by yulduzotajonova50 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea, supported by relevant details without unnecessary digressions.
coherence cohesion
Maintain consistency in verb tenses throughout the letter for better clarity; the switch from future to present to past tense can be confusing.
coherence cohesion
To increase the logical structure score, work on linking your ideas more coherently with a range of cohesive devices and appropriate paragraphing.
task achievement
You should expand on each point required by the task; some content areas are not fully developed. For example, give more specifics about the activities and clothing appropriate for the weather.
task achievement
Be sure to ask specific questions regarding the food, rather than making a general statement about its importance, to better achieve the task requirements.
task achievement
Minor grammatical errors and incorrect word choices, such as 'exited' instead of 'excited' and 'suit' instead of 'suitable,' should be corrected.
task achievement
The tone is generally suitable for a letter to a friend, but some parts could be made more personal and engaging to make the letter sound warm and genuine.