The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals

from 2013 to 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals

from 2013 to 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
The data presents the average prices of specific precious metals between the years 2013 to 2021.
Overall
, Palladium saw a rapid rise in prices,
whereas
Platinum saw a slight fall in costs, and Gold maintained a steady growth. Palladium prices fluctuated throughout 2013 and 2018
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it saw a dramatic growth in 2019, reaching a peak of approximately 2300 $ per oz. in 2021.
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Gold
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from the years 2015 to 2018,
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2019, at about 1700 $ per oz. Meanwhile, Platinum saw a constant decline from the years 2013 to 2020, with a slight rise
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2021.
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