The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided map depicts details about the future plans for upgrading the university

sport

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sports

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centre.

Overall

, the current main building will remain the same except

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for

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the gym,

while

the outdoor courts

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the

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both sides of the

center

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centre

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building will be demolished, in order to make

room

for expansion. To the left side of the main entrance, a small

sport

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sports

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shop and changing

room

will be added.

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front of the changing

room

larg

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large

leisure pool will be built

there

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, and

its

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will

takes

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up the most space when compared to other planned renovations. To the left side of the

entrane

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entrance

entrant

, in the top right-hand corner, there will be two dance studios as

will

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well

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as a

sport

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hall in front of them.

Furthermore

, an additional changing

room

is going to appear in the bottom right corner,

along with

a cafe next to it. The gym to the north of the centre is going to receive an

expanded

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expansion

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1Word repetition
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15Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

159 words

6.00

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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