The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map depicts details about the future plans for upgrading the university
sport
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centre.
Overall
, the current main building will remain the same except
fo
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for
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the gym,
while
the outdoor courts
in
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on
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the
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both sides of the
center
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centre
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building will be demolished, in order to make
room
for expansion. To the left side of the main entrance, a small
sport
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shop and changing
room
will be added.
On
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In
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front of the changing
room
a
larg
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large
leisure pool will be built
there
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, and
its
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it
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will
takes
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up the most space when compared to other planned renovations. To the left side of the
entrane
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entrance
entrant
, in the top right-hand corner, there will be two dance studios as
will
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well
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as a
sport
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hall in front of them.
Furthermore
, an additional changing
room
is going to appear in the bottom right corner,
along with
a cafe next to it. The gym to the north of the centre is going to receive an
expanded
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.
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