The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
The given pie charts provide information about the
figure
for Fix the agreement mistake
figures
energy
manufacturing in France between two
Correct article usage
the two
years
, 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, coal and gas energy
remained the highest proportion in both years
. Meanwhile
nuclear and other Add a comma
Meanwhile,
energy
accounted for less than 10%.
According to
the charts, energy
generated by coal made up 29,80% in 1995, then
there was a slight increase in 2005, about 30.93%. Similarly
, energy
from gas also
increased slightly from 29,63% to 30,31% in 10 years
.
By contrast
, petro was the only source which decreased from 29,27% in 1995 to 19,55% 10 years
later. On the other hand
, nuclear and other power accounted for the least
proportion of total Correct word choice
lowest
energy
produced, 4,90% with other energy
and 6,40% with nuclear sources in 1995, then
increased 9,10
% and 10,10%, respectively in the next ten Change preposition
to 9,10
years
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