In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts, while boys like science. what are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

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In schools

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and universities,
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like to choose
arts
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boys
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choose is depend on
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. I think most of the
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prefer
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enjoy and
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they select
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arts related
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subjects. But
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are interesting logical studies.
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, they select
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subject
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subjects

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. On the one hand, in
modern
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era,
girls
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like
with
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enjoy and
studies
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, so they decide to
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arts
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stream.
for example
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, music, drama,
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,and dance. nowadays, these are more rending subjects.so,
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girls
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mind
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like to select
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arts
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art

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scream. most of the universities are available
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the
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subjects and can
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their own language. so
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choose these scream and
also
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studing
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studying

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enjoy and relax. after
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, can go to other
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.can participate
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in competitive

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programs. more opportunities are available.
On the other hand
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have been
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interested

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to
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in studying

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study
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science
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mind
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like logical
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and they
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problem solving
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so they decide to choose
science
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site
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. they think
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subject
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help
to
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future
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to
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apply

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their
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. and can earn more money.
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for
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instance,
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analys
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their society. and find the problems.so they choose
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subject
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. In Conclusion, In my point of view,
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selection is not
depend
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on gender. that decide their
prefer
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, their
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mind set
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mindset

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, and
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gols
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goals

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Ensure correct spelling of key terms (e.g., 'goals' instead of 'gols' and 'stream' instead of 'scream') to maintain clarity and professionalism in your writing.
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Organize your essay into clear paragraphs with distinct introductory, body, and concluding sections. Each paragraph should have a central idea that is explored and supported throughout.
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Use a range of linking words to create cohesion between sentences and clarity of argument progression (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'However', 'Therefore').
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Fully address both parts of the task by discussing the reasons behind the trend and giving a clear opinion on whether this tendency should be changed.
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Remember to proofread your work for grammatical accuracy and to enhance the overall coherence and cohesion of your essay.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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