you use the local swimming pool often,and during one of your visits,you have encountered a promblem write a letter to the mananger describe what the promblem was tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it suggest your solution to the problem
Dear Sir ,
iam
writing Correct your spelling
I am
this
letter to express my suggestion to you about extra
Correct article usage
the extra
chlorine
content in your swimming pool
water .iam facing
during my Wrong verb form
I faced
last
visit At the onset, i
Change the capitalization
I
vivdly
remember all the members Correct your spelling
vividly
and
including me facing the problem.Correct word choice
apply
some one
from your emploees put extra Correct your spelling
someone
chlorine
in the swimming pool
.It causes numerious
skin problems Correct your spelling
numerous
moreover
,it causes skin alergy
and eyes Correct your spelling
allergies
become
red Fix the infinitive
to become
due to
high
content of Correct article usage
the high
chlorine
. furthermore
, the cleaning of the swimming pool
is too dirty. In the pool
area
there is no dustbinAdd a comma
area,
be placed
.the main problem is Verb problem
apply
lack
of staff and they have not changed the water on Correct article usage
the lack
daily
basis. Correct article usage
a daily
Hence
, being a scientist i
would like to suggest that they need to increase the temperature of water Change the capitalization
I
upto
40 Correct your spelling
up to
degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celcies
.that it breaks the Correct your spelling
celsius
Celcius
chlorine
molecule with the help of submersible
heat generator Correct article usage
a submersible
.when
Correct your spelling
When
this
process is done and
the Correct word choice
apply
promblem
is solved. look forward to hearing from Correct your spelling
problem
my
soonCorrect pronoun usage
you
your
faithfully, Vicky SharmaCorrect pronoun usage
yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a single, clear idea and that the ideas connect logically to each other. The letter should have also included an appropriate opening and closing to make it more polite and formal.
task achievement
Make sure to address all the bullet points of the task in a clear and detailed manner. The response should be complete and relevant to the prompts. Also, maintain a formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for writing to a manager.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.