you use the local swimming pool often,and during one of your visits,you have encountered a promblem write a letter to the mananger describe what the promblem was tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it suggest your solution to the problem

Dear Sir ,
iam
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I am
writing
this
letter to express my suggestion to you about
extra
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the extra
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chlorine
content in your swimming
pool
water
.iam facing
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during my
last
visit At the onset,
i
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vivdly
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vividly
remember all the members
and
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including me facing the problem.
some one
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someone
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from your emploees put extra
chlorine
in the swimming
pool
.It causes
numerious
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numerous
skin problems
moreover
,it causes skin
alergy
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allergies
and eyes
become
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red
due to
high
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the high
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content of
chlorine
.
furthermore
, the cleaning of the swimming
pool
is too dirty. In the
pool
area
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there is no dustbin
be placed
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.the main problem is
lack
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the lack
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of staff and they have not changed the water on
daily
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a daily
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basis.
Hence
, being a scientist
i
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would like to suggest that they need to increase the temperature of water
upto
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up to
40
degree
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celcies
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celsius
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.that it breaks the
chlorine
molecule with the help of
submersible
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a submersible
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heat generator
.when
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When
this
process is done
and
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the
promblem
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problem
is solved. look forward to hearing from
my
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you
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soon
your
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yours
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faithfully, Vicky Sharma
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a single, clear idea and that the ideas connect logically to each other. The letter should have also included an appropriate opening and closing to make it more polite and formal.
task achievement
Make sure to address all the bullet points of the task in a clear and detailed manner. The response should be complete and relevant to the prompts. Also, maintain a formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for writing to a manager.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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