This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
The line graph provides the information on percentage of four types of
items
that were recycled between 1982 and 2010. Overall
, the proportion of recycling various items
appear increasing, however
, plastics remains almost unchanged and paper experience fluctuations. To begin
with, the process recycling
Aluminum cans and plastics started late compared to glass and paper Change preposition
of recycling
on
around 1998 and 1992 respectively. Change preposition
in
Aluminum
bottles constantly Change the spelling
Aluminium
rises
over the period of time from approximately less than 5% to more than 40% which is the highest rising rate in the graph. Change the verb form
rise
In contrast
, plastics
Change the noun form
plastic
items
remains
on Change the verb form
remain
bottom
throughout the time with less than 10% being recycled. The remaining two Add an article
the bottom
items
seems
somehow similar on Change the verb form
seem
graph
. Glass containers Add an article
the graph
a graph
begins
convert Wrong verb form
began
from
1982 Change preposition
in
with
Change preposition
at
50
% rate, Correct article usage
a 50
drops
to 40% in Wrong verb form
dropped
Change the article
the 90s
90s
and steadily Correct your spelling
'90s
climbs
up to 60% until 2010. With regard to cardboard and paper, their rate of recycling was less than 70% Wrong verb form
climbed
in
the start which Change preposition
at
touch
the 70% margin in 2010 after experiencing fluctuation.Wrong verb form
touched
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