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The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Bar chart depicts a little alteration information about the outlook of
individuals
 who arose in and outside of
Australia
 having
life
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lived
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 in urban,rural and towns from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
,
those
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of those
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individuals
 who arose in
Australia
,
majority
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the majority
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 of them
was
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were
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 in
urban
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the urban
an urban
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 field in both time intervals.
While
 those who
llived
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lived
 in rural space, their population
was
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apply
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increased
then
 decreased.
However
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However,
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 those mortals who resided in towns were decreased with time
interval
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intervals
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.
Those
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Of those
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individuals
 who arose outside
the
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apply
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Australia
,
largest
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the largest
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was resided
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resided
has resided
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 in
urban
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the urban
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 field and
remaind
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remained
remain
remind
same
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the same
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 in both time
interval
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intervals
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.
However
 those who
were
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apply
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lived in rural
space
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spaces
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 their probability
was
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dramaticaly
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dramatically
 decreased.
While
 those who came from town,their outlook
was
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slightlyn
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slightly
 decreased in
next
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the next
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 interval. In 1995, about 45%
individuals
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of individuals
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 in
Australia
were arose
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arose
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 in
urban
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the urban
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 field and almost 60% were
in
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apply
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outside means their probability was high in outside.
Those
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Of those
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 who lived in rural areas
about
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were about
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 30% which was higher
in
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apply
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outside about 40%.Mortals who arose in towns in
Australia
 was 25% which was greater than those who lived
in
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outside of
Australia
 about 15%. In 2010,the
individuals
 who lived in
Australia
 was 60% which became lower than the outside about 80%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words individuals, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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