The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of participants (male and female) who passed their driving
test
from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
,
although
the female participants had a higher
percentage
than the male ones, they experienced a slight decline
at the end
of the period.
To begin
with, there were 48% of women who passed the driving
test
in 1980.
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next ten years, there was an
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5%. The percentages saw a gradual climb over the next ten years. They peaked in 2000
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68%, approximately, before slightly falling to around 63%.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of men who passed the driving
test
in the beginning period was just around 28%. they recorded
the
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significant growth
to
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37%
at
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the year 1990.
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the year 2000, the
percentage
of men who passed the driving
test
soared by 10%. The
percentage
remained
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even after ten years passed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, test with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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