The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of participants (male and female) who passed their driving test
from 1980 to 2010. Overall
, although
the female participants had a higher percentage
than the male ones, they experienced a slight decline at the end
of the period.
To begin
with, there were 48% of women who passed the driving test
in 1980. The
next ten years, there was an Change preposition
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increased
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at
5%. The percentages saw a gradual climb over the next ten years. They peaked in 2000 Change preposition
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with
68%, approximately, before slightly falling to around 63%.
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at
On the other hand
, the percentage
of men who passed the driving test
in the beginning period was just around 28%. they recorded the
significant growth Correct article usage
a
to
37% Change preposition
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at
the year 1990. Change preposition
in
At
the year 2000, the Change preposition
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percentage
of men who passed the driving test
soared by 10%. The percentage
remained same
even after ten years passed.Correct article usage
the same
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