The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar graph portrays the
percentage
of
households
in owned and rented
accommodation
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It can be inferred that the
percentage
of
households
in owned
accommodation
in 1918 was around a quarter and it has linearly increased from 1918 to 2001, which has the highest number of
households
owned
percentage
by their respective owners i.e., about 70
percent
. In 2011, a minor decrease can be seen in 2001 of 5
percent
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.
Secondly
, the
percentage
of
households
in rented
accommodation
has gradually decreased from 1918 being almost more than 75
percent
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to just above 30
percentage
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in 2001. In 2011, a slight increase
has been
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seen compared to a decade ago by 5
percent
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.
Overall
, it can be inferred that people have started residing in their abode over the years. In 1971, there seems to be an equal contribution of
percentage
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a percentage
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of
households
in owned and rented
accommodation
. After 1971, the
percentage
of
households
in owned
accommodation
has overpowered the
percentage
of
households
in rented
accommodation
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, accommodation, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
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