Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach.
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an alarming rate that we need to look at hybrid crops to account for the rising demand for food. In Linking Words
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The genetically
altered crops are very useful. It increases the production capacity of the fields and is more profitable for the farmers. Correct article usage
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technology can be useful with seasonal plants. The changes to the genes can help Linking Words
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vegetation in non-season months as well. Wrong verb form
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provides a surplus of staple grains and the developing nations can reduce their dependency on imports. Linking Words
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, in Russia, the cold climate makes it unsuitable for growing tropical greens, but the use of the new way of farming helps Russia Linking Words
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plants will certainly fill stomachs but will lead to various diseases in the long run. Recently, a study conducted showed that most of the products made from genetically changed products don't add any nutritional value and contribute to a lot of diseases. One of my friends suffered from anaemia in his teenage years and one of the causes mentioned by the doctors was the foodstuff from hybrid produce.
In conclusion, though there are some obvious plus points to using genetically modified vegetation, there are drawbacks and dangers that make us wonder if indeed we should use them.Linking Words
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task achievement
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that this idea is developed adequately. Avoid making unsubstantiated claims without providing evidence or further explanation. Expand on each advantage and disadvantage to provide a deeper analysis and more convincing arguments.
coherence cohesion
Organize the essay into clear paragraphs, each one focused on a single idea. Use cohesive devices to link ideas within and across paragraphs, but avoid overusing them. Consider a more varied use of discourse markers to better signal the structure of your argument and enhance the logical flow of the essay.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...