Example Question–Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers' (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).Do you agree or disagree?

People

belives

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believe

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that taking

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responsibilty

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responsibility

from

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for

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teenage

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teenagers

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is fruitful. Nowadays, many people think that

youngster

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should

involve

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be involved

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in social

activites

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activities

without taking any charges. In my mind,

i

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strongly disagree as they have so much

pressure

of

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from

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their study already and adding extra

extra

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apply

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responsibilty

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responsibility

can lead to stress. There is no doubt that

,

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apply

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taking a certain responsibility in

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apply

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society can help young people to grow

a

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apply

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great

citizen

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citizens

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in future.

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, when

i

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I

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was in my fifth class my society organized one of the charity

program

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programs

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where

i

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I

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had to

do

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apply

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control children . That

give

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gives

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me a sense of responsibility towards my community.

Thought

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it seems not a big deal but somehow

i

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feel little

pressure

.

Youngster

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Youngsters

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already have

alot

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a lot

of stress

of

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from

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so many

thing

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things

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. They have

pressure

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the pressure

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of

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from

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there

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their

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study

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studies

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also

they may be dealing with

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apply

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hermonal

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hormonal

changes so having extra

expectation

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expectations

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from them can lead to

divastating

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devastating

result

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results

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.

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: my younger brother has so much

pressure

from our family to score

good

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a good

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Gpa if

i

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I

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expect him to work for

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apply

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charity , to teach sports to

the

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children

i

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I

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dont

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don't

think he can balance his study. So

i

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I

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feel extra work should not be put on

onto

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apply

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them. In conclusion , though they might be a great citizen in

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the upcoming

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upcoming

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coming

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days

but

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having a sense of extra responsibility can lead to

seviour

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severe

stress.²