The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words

The bar graph gives detailed information about much percentage of men and women in Malaysia who regularly spent time doing physical activity in 2010. From an

overall

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perspective, It can be clearly seen that the highest indicator among the females is in the ages of

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35 to 64,

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among the men who exercise a lot is in the 15-24

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group. Meanwhile, in the 65 and over

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group, both gender demonstrates almost the same results. As for people who belong

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between 15

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45

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and 45

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, the proportion of males went down

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the female participants illustrated an increasing trend. Females start at about 47% in their 15-24 ages, finish with 52% until 44 years old and

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go beyond 50

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. In terms of 45 to 65 and over

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ranges, it is noticed contrast between males and females, men are superior with growth tendency around 42%,44%, and 46%, respectively. There is an exception in the 65 and over

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group that they are in more or less the same percentage.