The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph depicts the percentage of
people
who were born in and outside of Australia living in metropolian
areas, towns and rural districts in 1995 and 2010.
In 1995, about 55% of Correct your spelling
metropolitan
people
who born
in Australia lived in cities, Add a missing verb
were born
however
in Add a comma
however,
2010
it increased to about 64%. Other Add a comma
2010,
people
who lived in towns and rural districs
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districts
dicreased
from 20% and 30% respectively to about 17% for each.
As for Correct your spelling
decreased
people
who were born in foreign countries in 1995 about 60% of them Add a missing verb
were accomodated
accomodated
in cities. Already in Correct your spelling
accommodated
2010
these Add a comma
2010,
group
increased by 20%. Fix the agreement mistake
groups
Also
there Add a comma
Also,
were
Change the verb form
was
significant
decrease in Correct article usage
a significant
group
who lived in rural areas from 40% in 1995 to about 5% in 2010.
There Add an article
the group
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
steep
down in Correct article usage
a steep
third
group who Change the article
the third
accomodated
in tows from about 10% to Correct your spelling
accommodated
approximatyle
7% in 2010.
Correct your spelling
approximately
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that percentage
rate of populations in Correct article usage
the percentage
metropolian
areas in Australia Correct your spelling
metropolitan
gradully
increased, Correct your spelling
gradually
whereas
in rural and towns the rate went down.Submitted by anders.nameless on
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