The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graduates
(there are data provided about the type of employment and range of salaries with 5-year experience).
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graduates
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full-time
work
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the type of employment with the highest wages as Anthropologist is government sector and the lowest ones are in the private one.Submitted by zirtumagne on
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