The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university

did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the

salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart
undergraduate
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courses. As for the table below, it represents
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the wage
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wage
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wages
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of the
graduates
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(there are data provided about the type of employment and range of salaries with 5-year experience). The fact that becomes
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from studying the chart is that the majority of the
graduates
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find
a Full time
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work
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(52%). As for another part of the
students
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, they find part-time
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which is 15% of them all. Third by the quantity is
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of unemployed who are
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12%
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all
graduates
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.
Next
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group contains
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who
work
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full time and do postgraduate studies and is estimated by 8% of the total amount, their number is equal to the
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of
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,
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, and their number is equal to that of
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for whom no information is available. The
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group are people who combine part-time
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with postgraduate study and
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5% of the given amount. As far as the table given below
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concerned,
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who
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in the government sector
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the highest salaries (5% - $25,000-49,999, 15% - $50,000-74,999, 30% - $75,000-99,999, 30% - $100,000 or more). Freelancers at the same time
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got high high salaries too (5%, 15%, 40% and 40% considerably). Private companies workers
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got the smallest wage from the given(10%, 35%, 25% and 30%
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). Glancing at
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overall
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the overall
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picture, the number of
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who continue the studying process is not high and is about 13%
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the type of employment with the highest wages as Anthropologist is government sector and the lowest ones are in the private one.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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