The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph demonstrates the average CO2
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per person in the 4 European nations from 1967 to 2007.
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, Italy and Portugal had roughly the same upward trend as opposed to the UK and Sweden had a downward trend.
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, the steady reduction in the average
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in the UK was the highest in the given period. Among these selected countries, the average CO2
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per person in the UK decreased gradually in 1967 and the average emission stood at nearly 11 metric
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and in 2007 roughly 9 metric
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in Italy, the average CO2
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fell sharply and peaked at about (10) metric
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in 1977,
on the other hand
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, Italy’s CO2
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/generation, production nearly doubled. as kicked off at just above 4 metrics in 1967 and ended in almost 8.
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, Portugal's almost quadrupled. The per capita in 1967 was just 1.5 metric
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but in 2007 the
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reached 5.5 metric
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and eventually matched Sweden's average.
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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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