The graph shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different types of attractions from 1980 to 2010. Summarise the chart by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph demonstrates the proportion of visitors to Scotland inviting four different types of attractions over a period of 31 years from 1980 to 2010. As can be seen in the graph, the percentage of tourists to Scotland fluctuated during the period. Another interesting point is that the aquarium and the festival were less popular than the castle and the zoo

over

Change preposition

at

show examples

the same time. In 1980, the percentage of visitors going to the Festival in Scotland was significantly more than 30%. From 1980 to 2010,

this

Linking Words

figure saw a moderate decline to around 23%, which indicated a drop of about 7%. Starting with nearly 25% in the initial year, the proportion of people

enjoy

Correct pronoun usage

who enjoy

show examples

visiting

to

Remove the preposition

apply

show examples

the Castle witnessed a

dramatical

Correct your spelling

dramatic

show examples

growth to almost 40% during the same period. Between 1980 and 2010, there was a steep decrease

to

Change preposition

of

show examples

approximately 10% in the rate of guests paying a visit to the Aquarium. Beginning from 10% at the onset of the duration, there was a twofold increase to 20% in the figure for visitors travelling to the Zoo.