The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie charts depict Australia's household
energy
consumption and greenhouse gas
emissions which result from this
energy
use.
Overall
, heating water takes 30% of energy
and also
it produces the same amount of greenhouse gas
. In addition
, heating consumes the largest sum of energy
about 42%, while
it spreads only a low amount of toxic gas
,which is around 15%.
To begin
with, energy
utilization for cooling, lighting and refrigeration are in less quantity, which are 2, 4, 7. Furthermore
, water heating is the second largest in using energy
,which is almost 30%. Finally
, some other appliance
use only 15% of Change the wording
appliances
energy
.
On the other hand
, cooling has the least per cent of 3 , in emitting greenhouse gas
. Further
, heating and refrigeration contribute 14 and 15, while
water heating alone makes the highest total of 32. Lastly
, lighting and other appliances give around 8 and 28.
To sum up
, lighting and refrigeration has
to double the amount of percentage Change the verb form
have
in
emitting Change preposition
apply
gas
than consuming energy
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