The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided pie charts depict Australia's household
energy
consumption and greenhouse Use synonyms
gas
emissions which result from Use synonyms
this
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energy
use.
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Overall
, heating water takes 30% of Linking Words
energy
and Use synonyms
also
it produces the same amount of greenhouse Linking Words
gas
. Use synonyms
In addition
, heating consumes the largest sum of Linking Words
energy
about 42%, Use synonyms
while
it spreads only a low amount of toxic Linking Words
gas
,which is around 15%.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
energy
utilization for cooling, lighting and refrigeration are in less quantity, which are 2, 4, 7. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, water heating is the second largest in using Linking Words
energy
,which is almost 30%. Use synonyms
Finally
, some other Linking Words
appliance
use only 15% of Change the wording
appliances
energy
.
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On the other hand
, cooling has the least per cent of 3 , in emitting greenhouse Linking Words
gas
. Use synonyms
Further
, heating and refrigeration contribute 14 and 15, Linking Words
while
water heating alone makes the highest total of 32. Linking Words
Lastly
, lighting and other appliances give around 8 and 28.
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To sum up
, lighting and refrigeration Linking Words
has
to double the amount of percentage Change the verb form
have
in
emitting Change preposition
apply
gas
than consuming Use synonyms
energy
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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