The maps below show changes in the town of Youngsville in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005.

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maps illustrate the evolutions that occur in the coastal town of Youngswhile between 1980 and 2005. In 1980,the town was a much greener residential area with a huge amount of trees and separate houses,but,throughout the next 25

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the town witnessed a quantity of dramatic changes.The most perceptible is that all of the trees

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south

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skyscrapers.

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,a new industrial estate with factories and warehouses sprang up around the airport and school.

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,only a few trees north of the

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were left.The woodland gave way to make way for a park,a golf course,

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,car parking facilities.

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developments were the construction of the lake and a new stretch of railway from the

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running directly north.A marina was

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constructed at the north of the

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,a comparison of the two maps reveals a vast change

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rural to a mainly urban landscape.