The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrate what graduate and postgraduate students did after college in the UK in 2008.
Further
study is the most popular destination for both graduate and postgraduate students and
also
popularity of destinations of UK graduates and postgraduates is similar in both two groups. Most of the graduates went for higher education just about 29,665
while
graduate students who did voluntary work had the lowest number with 3,500.
By comparison
, the difference between the number of part-time workers and unemployed is much less, with 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
According to
the second chart, most postgraduates went for a higher level of education or part-time work, with 2,725 and 2,535 respectively, followed by unemployment with 1,625.
However
, the least number of postgraduates went for
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voluntary work, with 345.
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