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The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about cocoa bean production in
tons
 in six independent regions every two years from 1992 to 1998. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, from the period of 1992 to 1998, North and Central
America
, and Oceania were harvesting similar amounts of cocoa beans,
while
 the Caribbean, South
America
, Africa and
Asia
 had a 4-year gap after 1992, met with fluctuations in crop capacity. North and Central
America
 produced 50,000
tons
 in 1992 and had a small decrease in yield in 1994(43.000
tons
) and 1996(49.000
tons
).
However
, in 1998 it returned to its cocoa productivity as it was in 1992.
On the other hand
, Oceania's capacity was generally decreasing. From 41.000
tons
 in the initial year, it dropped to 31.000 by 1998, with a rise from 34.000
tons
 to 39.000
tons
 in 1994 and 1996, respectively. The Caribbean (49.000
tons
), South
America
(179.000
tons
), Africa(1.761.000
tons
) and
Asia
(96.000
tons
) followed the goal to boost their productivity, as in 1992 those countries stopped collecting beans for 4 years.
Furthermore
, the Caribbean and Africa succeeded by
following
this
 strategy and rocketed their income by reaching their peak at 69.000
tons
 and 1.971.000
tons
 in 1996, respectively.
Whereas
, South
America
 and
Asia
 failed, as their yield dropped to 157.000
tons
 and 94.000
tons
 by 1996, severally.
Nevertheless
,
Asia
's production improved by 4.000
tons
 in 1998.
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