The graph shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over in major developed countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The three trends provide information about the people who are 65 years and above in
the
nations Correct article usage
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such
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Sweeden
, Japan Correct your spelling
Sweden
as well
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as
America.In overview, all three countries experienced Correct word choice
and
a
growth in a period of a century from 1940 to 2040.
To start with, in Correct article usage
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Sweeden
, humans started with about 7% of the population in 1940 and increased up to 9% after 20 years in around 1960. Correct your spelling
Sweden
Furthermore
, it Linking Words
grews
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grows
grew
up
to twenty per cent in 2020, Change preposition
apply
while
fluctuations began until it Linking Words
will reaches
its maximum of 25% in 2040.To add on, Japan Wrong verb form
reached
also
commenced with a least percentage of the society ranging from 65 years old and over, Linking Words
whereas
, as times moves on, it will be the highest, Linking Words
this
means that it will be all over America and Linking Words
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Sweeden
.
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Sweden
Moreover
, a sharp climb shall occur between 2030 and 2040 from about 10% rising to 25 per cent in less than two decades. Linking Words
Lastly
, since Japan spent almost 30 annuals below the others, it will Linking Words
also
surpass Linking Words
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Sweeden
and the United States of America Correct your spelling
Sweden
at the end
of the period, which is close to 2040.Linking Words
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