The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to Japan for different purposes between 1990 and 2010.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals the tourists of foreigns who came to Japan for various purposes after two decades.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is evident that there was a downward trend experienced in all intentions. Linking Words
Moreover
, the number of businesses was the highest number over the 20-year.
In terms of Linking Words
business’s
data, it started at approximately 6 Change noun form
business
million
and rose dramatically Use synonyms
just
10 Change preposition
to just
million
by 2005. Use synonyms
Although
it exponential decline, it gradually increased and reached 9 Linking Words
million
in the Use synonyms
last
year.
With regard to holiday and Linking Words
visit
friend information , there was a slight movement underwent in both purposes, except for the initial point and the growth level. In 1990, the figures for holiday and Use synonyms
visit
friends began at about 5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
as well as
merely 4 Linking Words
million
respectively. What is more, there were similar points in about 1993 and in 2005 between holiday and Use synonyms
visit
friends stood at 4 Use synonyms
million
and about 7 Use synonyms
million
equivalently. Use synonyms
Finally
, Whilst holidays took up the second rank with negligibly 7 Linking Words
million
, the Use synonyms
visit
friends decreased minimally Use synonyms
at
6 Change preposition
to
million
in 2010.Use synonyms
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