You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for launch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
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all day meeting in your hotel. I am writing Correct your spelling
organised
organized
this
letter in regard to the services by the
your motel as all of the Remove the article
apply
candiates
are Correct your spelling
candidates
statisifed
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satisfied
by
your hospitality.
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with
To begin
with, all the servies
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services
provide
by your employees were flawless and Wrong verb form
provided
there
greeting was very nice.Correct your spelling
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Moreover
, the meeting place you gave us was very quite
and Correct your spelling
quiet
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. My Correct your spelling
peaceful
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does not face any Correct your spelling
candidates
pradicament
for the parking and finding the meeting spot as your staff member help them a lot.
On behalf of my team Correct your spelling
predicament
member
I am writing Add a comma
member,
this
letter as they were unstatisfed
with the food services as they did not like the food. I had Correct your spelling
unsatisfied
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some special requirement Correct your spelling
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greeting and closing
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complete response
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suitable writing tone
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logical structure
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The Closing
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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,