The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the consumed amount of meat divided into four various categories namely beef, chicken, fish and lamb, counted in
gram
, from 1979 to 2004. Fix the agreement mistake
grams
Overall
, there was a recessive growth pattern witnessed in almost all data, which followed the opposite trend in comparison to Linking Words
chicken’s
intake. In terms Change noun form
chicken
of
Change preposition
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that
of beef, being the highest consumed amount compared to other categories at 200 in 1979, it fluctuated around Correct pronoun usage
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this
number till 1989, before experiencing a drastic and continuous decline to over 100 which was its trough in a subsequent 15-year period. Regarding the Linking Words
chicken’s
and Change noun form
chicken
lamb’s
consumption, Change noun form
lamb
although
they had the same initial points, they had the distinction in levels of growth. Linking Words
While
the former accelerated and reached its peak at 250 in the Linking Words
year end
, the latter decreased vigorously and relentlessly by 100 after 25 years. With respect to the amount of fish eaten, it was the only one that experienced Add a hyphen
year-end
a
stability at about 50 during the mentioned period of time.Remove the article
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