The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at a line graph provided reveals the consumed amount of meat divided into four various categories namely beef, chicken, fish and lamb, counted in
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, from 1979 to 2004.
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, there was a recessive growth pattern witnessed in almost all data, which followed the opposite trend in comparison to
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intake. In terms
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of beef, being the highest consumed amount compared to other categories at 200 in 1979, it fluctuated around
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number till 1989, before experiencing a drastic and continuous decline to over 100 which was its trough in a subsequent 15-year period. Regarding the
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and
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consumption,
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they had the same initial points, they had the distinction in levels of growth.
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the former accelerated and reached its peak at 250 in the
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, the latter decreased vigorously and relentlessly by 100 after 25 years. With respect to the amount of fish eaten, it was the only one that experienced
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stability at about 50 during the mentioned period of time.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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