You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The

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pie chart diagrams

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represents the difference between 1958 and 2008

of

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adult sharing their time in different activities in a country.

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, over a span of several years, it can be clearly observed that people did not

went

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through any major significant transformation in their working activity. There are

slght

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slight

changes in working, sleeping and going out with family and friends. In 1958, as per

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diagram 33% persons

are

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were

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wokingholic, 8%

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of indivisuals

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indivisuals

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individuals

individual

spent their time

in

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apply

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relaxing at home followed by 32% like to sleeping and only 2%

peoples

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people

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are

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travelling to work, where 19%

human

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of human

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beings

are going

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went

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out with their family and friends followed by 6% humans had other

intrests

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interests

or playing sports. Comparatively in 2008, individual changed their working habits by 42%, later

ralaxing

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relaxing

at home

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increased by 5%

too

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to

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13%, but sleeping habit

are

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dicreased

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decreased

to 25%

following

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followed

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by going out with friends and family

6

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by 6

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%,

although

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there

is

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were

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changes in travel to work from 2% to 8% and same with other interests or playing sports 8%.