You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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given
pie chart diagramsVerb problem
apply
,
represents the difference between 1958 and 2008 Remove the comma
apply
of
adult sharing their time in different activities in a country.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, over a span of several years, it can be clearly observed that people did not went
through any major significant transformation in their working activity. There are Change the verb form
go
slght
changes in working, sleeping and going out with family and friends.
In 1958, as per Correct your spelling
slight
given
diagram 33% persons Correct article usage
the given
are
wokingholic, 8% Wrong verb form
were
Change preposition
of indivisuals
indivisuals
spent their time Correct your spelling
individuals
individual
in
relaxing at home followed by 32% like to sleeping and only 2% Change preposition
apply
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
are
travelling to work, where 19% Unnecessary verb
apply
human
beings Change preposition
of human
are going
out with their family and friends followed by 6% humans had other Wrong verb form
went
intrests
or playing sports.
Comparatively in 2008, individual changed their working habits by 42%, later Correct your spelling
interests
ralaxing
at home Correct your spelling
relaxing
also
increased by 5% too
13%, but sleeping habit Correct your spelling
to
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
dicreased
to 25% Correct your spelling
decreased
following
by going out with friends and familyWrong verb form
followed
6
%, Change preposition
by 6
although
there is
changes in travel to work from 2% to 8% and same with other interests or playing sports 8%.Wrong verb form
were
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