The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures show how a public library transformed over 20 years.
Overall
, there were significant changes in the central public library such
as area layout and some rooms added without expanding the wide areas.
Firstly
, tables and chairs in front of the entrance door were already removed. On the left side, the CDs, videos, and computer games were replaced with children’s fiction books
which included 2 added sofas to support storytelling events. The compartment of adult fiction books
changed with all reference books
. And also
, the reading room transformed into to computer room.
Secondly
, on the right side, the section on children’s books
is substituted to
the lecture room. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, the adult non-fiction books
were renovated into to information desk with self-service machines and adult fiction books
. Also
, an inquiry desk was reconstructed to become a café.
Almost all of the design layout of the central library already
been changed except the entrance doors.Add a missing verb
has already
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