Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter about our next meet
. I , my wife and my two Replace the word
meeting
Childrens
are Correct your spelling
children
plan
to come your home to next summer, I am very happy after ten years, we will meet. The following paragraph Wrong verb form
planning
discuss
Change the verb form
discusses
with
that happy news,
Change preposition
apply
First,
next summer, I have a meeting at
Canada Change preposition
in
city
. So I Capitalize word
City
planed
to come only Correct your spelling
planned
me
. But my wife and Change preposition
to me
Childrens
asked Correct your spelling
children
to
me about they Change preposition
apply
will
come, Now I booked sheet Wrong verb form
would
my
family. I do not know anyone Add the comma(s)
, my
at
Canada. I will go Change preposition
in
one day
meeting. Add a hyphen
one-day
That
time we would like to come Change preposition
At that
your
home. Because we will arrange a hotel. Change preposition
to your
As well as
, after Rephrase
Also
meeting
we can not still their. Because hotel packages will increase double. So our family like to meet you all.
Correct article usage
the meeting
Furthermore
, If you
available Add a verb
you are
you were
that
summer days, let me know, I know you and your family are very busy. I do not force you. If you have free time, we will join your enjoyment.
Please let me know after getting Change preposition
on
this
letter, I am waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Mathu.PSubmitted by ajeevatharsan on
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Task Achievement
The letter does not respond to the task given, as it discusses a personal visit rather than offering help to Mrs. Barrett in her home. Respond directly to the task by suggesting specific ways you could assist Mrs. Barrett.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter lacks a clear logical structure, and the ideas are not arranged coherently. Make sure to organize your writing into paragraphs with clear purposes: an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
Task Achievement
Address Mrs. Barrett appropriately with a polite introduction and conclusion to maintain a suitable writing tone.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that you maintain a single idea per paragraph for clarity and to strengthen the coherence of your letter.
