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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of
water
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 utilization in agriculture, industry and household chores globally.
Moreover
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, the table reveals data on
water
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 consumption in
Brazil
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 and
Congo
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 in 2000.
Overall
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, as can be seen, agriculture accounted for the highest amount of
water
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use
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,
whereas
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 domestic
use
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 was the lowest over the whole period.
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, the figure for
water
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 consumption was higher in
Brazil
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 compared with
Congo
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 in the mentioned year. Between 1900 and 2000, the figure for
water
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use
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 soared totally for all three sectors.
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, the amount of
water
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 in industrial
use
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 and domestic
use
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 remained constant at zero until approximately 1940. With regard to
Brazil
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 and
Congo
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water
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use
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,
although
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 irrigation land in
Congo
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 was four times as large as in
Brazil
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, the population was dramatically less than that of
Congo
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 and the
water
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 consumption was exactly 8 metres cubic which was far less than 359 metres cubic in
Brazil
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, brazil, congo, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • distribution
  • agriculture
  • industry
  • domestic
  • sector
  • trends
  • discrepancies
  • sustainability
  • resource management
  • environmental impact
  • efficient
  • scarce
  • irrigation
  • desalination
  • sanitation
  • water-intensive
  • renewable resource
  • per capita
  • infrastructure
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