The natural resources such as oil, forest, and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems doeas it cause? How can we solve these problems?
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last
two or three decades, natural resources
have reduced
more tremendously than ever before Add a missing verb
been reduced
due to
the over
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apply
consumptions
. The natural Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
resources
of oil, fresh water and forest are finite and will soon end in the upcoming future. There are somse
reasons behind Correct your spelling
some
this
adverse situations
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situation
as well as
there are some possible remedies can
be solved it. Correct pronoun usage
that can
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essay discusses it briefly for the folowing
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following
reason
.
There are some reasons for the natural Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
resources
would be finished. One of the main cause
is the over Fix the agreement mistake
causes
consumptions
of Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
resources
like oil and fresh water. people are consumed
more fossil fuels for their Wrong verb form
consume
transporation
facilities, not only for long travels but Correct your spelling
transportation
also
the short distances too, thus
, oils might be wasted by over
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apply
consumptions
. Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
For example
, a recent sensus said that,
fossil fuels will be the next 60 years only with now Remove the comma
apply
consumptions
rate. Another reason is deforestation, the population Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
cut
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cuts
forest
enormously Fix the agreement mistake
forests
for building
innumerable residential houses, Change preposition
to build
consequently
, it would be affected the eco-system like erosion of soil and increase the earth
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earth's
tempreature
.
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temperature
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, there are some possible solutions Correct pronoun usage
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could
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that could
be solved
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solve
this
tendency. One of the main remedy
is Change to a plural noun
remedies
the
infinite Correct your spelling
that
energy
should be used in
everywhere namely Change preposition
apply
companies
and houses. There are Change preposition
in companies
an
alternative sources Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
can
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that can
be cured
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cure
this
issue such
as solar and wind energy
. For instance
, solar system
should be fixed on the top of the roof in houses and organisations in order to we can get more infinite Fix the agreement mistake
systems
energy
resources
. Another solution is cutting trees should be stopped instead
of enormous tress
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trees
should be
planted Wrong verb form
being
in
everywhere; the Change preposition
apply
authority
should Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
be implemented
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implement
a strict rules
against the folks who Correct the article-noun agreement
strict rules
a strict rule
cuts
trees.
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cut
To conclude
, deforestation and over consumption
are the main reasons for an alarming rate of oil, fresh water and forest. Correct your spelling
overconsumption
An alternative
and infinite Correct the article-noun agreement
Alternative
energy
sources like wind and solar and more trees should be planted in
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apply
everwhere
are the possible Correct your spelling
everywhere
solution
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solutions
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