The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans demonstrate the current version of

airport’s

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the airport’s

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southwest site and its proposed enhancement plan for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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year.

Overall

, the plan is

widening

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to widen

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the gate

area

with additional

gates

and increase the facility number inside the building. In detail, the only areas that will be the same are passport control, customs and security points

placing

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placed

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at both departures and arrivals. Regarding the

gates

area

, the number of the

gates

will be 18

instead

of 8. Since the number of

gates

will be increased, the walkway we have today will be replaced by

sky

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a sky

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train in order to

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apply

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move more fast between

gates

Furthermore

, the entrance and exit

door

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doors

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at the departures and arrivals building will be doubled. When we

will

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apply

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enter the departure

area

new

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the new

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bag drop

area

will be placed in the same

place

where the check-in point is and

also

check-in point will take

cafe’s

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the cafe’s

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place

and

then

the cafe will replace

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apply

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the diagonal corner of its original

place

Additionally

, in the arrivals

area

new cafe, ATM and

place

for car hiring will be opened. The building will

be widen

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be widened

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from

right

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a right

the right

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corner just for placing the car hiring facility.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Work on logically organizing your ideas. Your essay should have a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Use paragraphs effectively to separate different main features.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion. The introduction should set the context and the conclusion should effectively summarize the main points or propose implications.

Coherence and Cohesion

Support each main point with clear details and explanations. Try to expand on how each feature compares to the original and why these changes are significant.

Task Achievement

Ensure that your response is complete, addressing all parts of the task and providing a clear representation of the information given.

Task Achievement

Your ideas should be expressed clearly and comprehensively. Consider each aspect of the plan and discuss it in a way that the reader can easily understand.

Task Achievement

Use specific examples to support your points. This will give the reader a clearer understanding of the development and changes taking place at the airport site.

Fully explain your ideas

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

194 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
terminal
runway
refurbishment
redevelopment
amenities
car park
hangar
concourse
public transport hub
access roads
boarding gates
check-in desk
baggage claim
departure lounge
observation deck
duty-free shopping

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