The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans demonstrate the current version of

airport’s

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the airport’s

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southwest site and its proposed enhancement plan for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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year.

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, the plan is

widening

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the gate

area

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with additional

gates

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and increase the facility number inside the building. In detail, the only areas that will be the same are passport control, customs and security points

placing

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at both departures and arrivals. Regarding the

gates

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area

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, the number of the

gates

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will be 18

instead

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of 8. Since the number of

gates

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will be increased, the walkway we have today will be replaced by

sky

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train in order to

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apply

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move more fast between

gates

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Furthermore

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, the entrance and exit

door

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doors

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at the departures and arrivals building will be doubled. When we

will

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apply

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enter the departure

area

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new

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the new

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bag drop

area

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will be placed in the same

place

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where the check-in point is and

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check-in point will take

cafe’s

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the cafe’s

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place

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and

then

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the cafe will replace

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the diagonal corner of its original

place

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, in the arrivals

area

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new cafe, ATM and

place

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for car hiring will be opened. The building will

be widen

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from

right

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a right

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corner just for placing the car hiring facility.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Work on logically organizing your ideas. Your essay should have a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Use paragraphs effectively to separate different main features.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion. The introduction should set the context and the conclusion should effectively summarize the main points or propose implications.

Coherence and Cohesion

Support each main point with clear details and explanations. Try to expand on how each feature compares to the original and why these changes are significant.

Task Achievement

Ensure that your response is complete, addressing all parts of the task and providing a clear representation of the information given.

Task Achievement

Your ideas should be expressed clearly and comprehensively. Consider each aspect of the plan and discuss it in a way that the reader can easily understand.

Task Achievement

Use specific examples to support your points. This will give the reader a clearer understanding of the development and changes taking place at the airport site.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

194 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
terminal
runway
refurbishment
redevelopment
amenities
car park
hangar
concourse
public transport hub
access roads
boarding gates
check-in desk
baggage claim
departure lounge
observation deck
duty-free shopping

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Fully explain your ideas

As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Television sports program shows such Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree include examples in your answer and provide your owns opinion.