The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many travelers
come
came Verb problem
apply
1to
three areas: the Change preposition
from 1to
coast
, the mountains, and the lakes
in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Overall
, there was an increase in three different areas. 2 It is clear that
the coast
and the lakes
were more attractive than the mountains. In 1987,3 the coast
,where the place was the most interesting overseas visitorswhere
most overseas Correct your spelling
visitors where
visitors were
visitors
visited , reached welcomed 640 thousand
people
. The number of travelers
witnessed a significant increase7 in these two areas. Overseas Change the spelling
travellers
Visitors
The number of overseas visitors
8to
the Correct your spelling
8 to
lakes
reached a peak in 2002, approximately 70 thousand
people
,9 and the figure for people
to the coast
also
got the same amount in 2007. But this
yearin
Correct your spelling
year in
year
this
year, 10 the number of overseas visitors
to the lakes
dropped to 50 thousand
people
. 11 The amount travelersamount of travelers12 to the mountains started at 20 thousand
people
and this
figure 13increased slightly to about 30 thousand
people
in 2007.Submitted by huoglan10 on
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