The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1990, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
The graphs demonstrate how many visits were made to Britain between 1979 and 1990,
in addition
to an evaluation of the most visited countries by British dwellers in the year 1999.
Overall
, it is clear that
although
the number of people paying a visit to foreign countries has risen considerably, that of the UK witnessed a slight increase. Moreover
, Turkey and France were the least and the most popular regions among British residents, respectively.
Focusing on the first graph, it is noticeable that in the first seven years, the trends of visits to and from the United Kingdom shared a similar trend with the latter one being of more intensity by a margin of 5 million
. Next,
from 1986 to 1999, moving from the UK accumulated from 20 to around 55 million
. However
, the second trend rose to less than 5 million
, reaching approximately 25 million
people.
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