Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that
arts
subjects
such
as painting or drawing must not be a must for secondary scholars. I agree with this
opinion to a greater extent, and in this
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Firstly
, painting or drawing subjects
should not be made compulsory at school because students
have strength in other subjects
. Other students
have interest
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an interest
such
as english
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For example
, if students
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drawing and they do not have Change preposition
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interest
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an interest
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Furthermore
, they will hate going to school only because of one particular suject
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subjects
to select from, and if they are doing what they like the most they will take part with full concentration.
Moreover
, not all students
are good at practical subjects
. If schools make it mandatory for these subjects
to be done at school, this
will lead to a decrease in performance in some children. In other words
, some pupils do not have the intellectual abilities to excel in practical subjects
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subjects
should not be made compulsory as others have strength in theoretical subjects
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, on the other side arts
subjects
should be made compulsory because it encourages all students
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arts
subjects
as it will benefit them in the future. For instance
, If they fail some theory subjects
they can specialize in arts
, and for some of them that is
where their strength will be. It will be helpful to make these subjects
mandatory.
In conclusion, painting or drawing subjects
must not be mandatory as this
limits the potential of students
in other subjects
and it also
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