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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table chart shows weald land in millions of
hectar
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hectare
hectares
 on different continents.
Overall
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, it is recorded that the largest size was occupied by Europe in 2005, and the smallest size was filled by Oceania in 2005. As can be seen, Africa
stated
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stood
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 at 749;
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, experience decreased moderately two times, from 709 until 691, respectively, in the period given. Similar to Africa, South America, and Oceania, there was a slight decline, with a little less than before in the previous year.
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, Europe experienced a significant increase at 989 and 1001 respectively in the following year. Asia was the second-highest follower; the trend increased, but it was a little more than before from 1990 to 2000.
As a result
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, the tablet had two similar trends: the first trend was moderate, and the second was that experience rose.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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