The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The two plans indicate the changes that are going to be done in Norbition’s industrial area. In general, the factories will be replaced by houses and there will be more infrastructures that a living site needs.
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the figure, all the factories are going to be closed down and destroyed,
instead
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of them, it is planned to build some places for
residence
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all over the area.
Furthermore
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, the farmland on the north side of the river will be transferred to the northeast and will be replaced by housing. As can be seen, in the matter of infrastructure, the roads are going to be extended to bring vast access to the different parts;
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, there will be a bridge over the river, which leads to the buildings on the north side of it.
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, on the south side of the central square, some shops and a health centre are going to be built on both sides of the path.
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but not least, on the eastern half of the site, there will be a
spece
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space
for playing and
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it is planned to build
school
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a school
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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