The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram

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illustrates

the

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rain

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rainwater

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water

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harvesting in which

water

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is collected and treated to be used as any drinkable liquid in an

Asutralian

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Australian

town.

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, the process is composed

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firstly

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collecting

rain

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rainwater

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water

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and

filter

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it.

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storage

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tank

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a tank

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where it can be treated with chemicals and

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re-distributed to

household

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the household

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with, every house is connected

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two pipelines, one is linked to collect all

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water

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the water

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and

second

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the second

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is used to transport liquid to

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water

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the water

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filter.

Where liquid

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filteration

take

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place and after the filtration

water

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is transported

though

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through

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pipe

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a pipe

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storage

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where all harvested

water

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is stored. Another cistern

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situated

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besides

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beside

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storage

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the storage

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tank is

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treatment, where

liquid

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the liquid

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is transported by pipes through

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and it will

treated

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water

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by different chemicals and make

water

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drinkable.

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with the help of

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water

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is moved for reuse in homes as drinking

water

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, storage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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