The diagrams below show the present college and its plan in 2025 as proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the current layout and future development of
college
in 2020.
Add an article
the college
Overall
, a comparison of the maps reveal
that the layout will Change the verb form
reveals
be totally transform
and expanding the Change the verb form
be totally transformed
college
building for academic facilities. Moreover
all the Add a comma
Moreover,
footpath
and garden will be demolished and change the door entrance to the opposite position.
In terms of the Fix the agreement mistake
footpaths
college
prior to the development, the main road
is
placed in the south of the building with a bus stop situated in the corner between Wrong verb form
was
intersection
of the main Add an article
the intersection
road
and foot
Correct your spelling
footpath
path
. Moreover
, the foot
Correct your spelling
footpath
path
has a T shape, started
from Wrong verb form
starting
main
Change the article
the main
road
to the north with car
park to the west and connected to another Correct article usage
a car
foot
Correct your spelling
footpath
path
from west to the
east. The main gate to the Correct article usage
apply
college
can be accessed from the foot
Correct your spelling
footpath
path
and situated
Add a missing verb
is situated
in
north of the Change preposition
apply
college
building. Inside of
the Change preposition
apply
building
there are several Add a comma
building,
part
, in the west Change to a plural noun
parts
area
of the door situated a luch
Correct your spelling
lunch
area
and two classrooms. Meanwhile the
in the east Correct article usage
apply
area
lie in
a classroom, a reception and a library. Change preposition
apply
Last
, the toilet can found
Add a missing verb
be found
in
across Change preposition
apply
of
the door.
Regarding the changes plan in the layout, the Change preposition
from
foot
Correct your spelling
footpath
path
and garden will be removed for expanding
the main building and car park. Some facilities inside the building Change preposition
to expand
also
will be experienced several renovation
, the entrance will be moved to the south of the building and can Change to a plural noun
renovations
be access
directly from the Change the verb form
be accessed
road
. Furthermore
, two extra classroom
will be added on the east side of the building. Change to a plural noun
classrooms
Therefore
the library will relocated
Change the verb form
relocate
accross
it and Correct your spelling
across
reception
Correct article usage
the reception
srink
to a circle in the middle of the building. Correct your spelling
sink
Shop
Add an article
The shop
also
will added it the north of the bulding
next to the new toilet location. Correct your spelling
building
However
, there will no
change Add a missing verb
be no
location
for Change preposition
in location
bus
stop, lunch Add an article
the bus
a bus
area
and one classroom.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, road, foot, path, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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