You recently organised and old a meeting for your company. Which took place in local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the managers should do to improve the food in future
Dear Madam or Sir,
My company's budget meeting was held in your hotel
last
Friday. We are global
company, Add an article
a global
therefore
I hosted many guests around the world. After a meeting, I had a lot of feedback about your hotel from my visitors. The hotel's location was perfect, it was easy to access the city center
. The rooms were great, Change the spelling
centre
clean
and Correct word choice
apply
historical
designs were impressive.
But Correct article usage
the historical
i
would like to express my and my guest's dissatisfaction with the lunch. Your cuisine was open budget, there were no responsible staff in here. Visitors can easily touch foods with no gloves, Change the capitalization
I
no
one Correct word choice
and no
warn
them,Change the verb form
warns
therefore
, hygiene rules were not implemented. Your cuisine was not well enough. We were expected
more world cuisines. Like Japanese, Chinese etc..
As you know, nowadays vegan people ratio Wrong verb form
expecting
is
increased and there Verb problem
has
were
no vegan Wrong verb form
are
stand
. My vegan visitors starved. My suggestion is, you should serve Fix the agreement mistake
stands
from
more different cuisines. Maybe you should hire Change preposition
apply
a
Italian chef for Italian Change the article
an
foods
. In Fix the agreement mistake
food
closed
you can find my information Change the form of the verb
closing
with
my e-mail.
I look forward to your reply,
Yours Faithfully,
Merve KerküklüChange preposition
in
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph is centered around one main idea and develop that idea fully. Some paragraphs in the letter attempted to cover multiple points, which can lead to a lack of clarity.
coherence cohesion
Organize your writing logically, using connectors to clearly show the relationship between ideas, and make sure your letter follows a proper business format.
task achievement
Maintain a clear and polite tone throughout, suitable for a business correspondence, and always use professional and respectful language.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task thoroughly. While you have mentioned some specific details, expanding on these by giving more direct explanations or examples could enhance the thoroughness of the response.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite