The bar chart compares female unemployment rates in the four countries of the UK in 2013 and 2014.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of jobless women in four distinct nations between 2013 to 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of unemployed females were from England and Scotland while
Northern Ireland and Wales were few. Both countries had almost the same percentages in each year.
To begin
with, the unemployment rate in England stood at almost 7% in 2013 which was just over 0.3 proportion higher than in 2014. In addition
, the segment reduced by one in Scotland and increased to about 0.2% in 2013 and 2014 respectively.
By contrast
, Wales had a few unemployment challenges. In 2013, less than one in ten comprised of the situation. Moreover
, this
fraction reduced
by 0.4 in the next year. Add a missing verb
was reduced
Furthermore
, the proportion of this
trend constituted 5.6% and decreased by one-tenth in North Ireland by 2013 and 2014 respectively.Submitted by mboadi211 on
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