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The table below shows the percentages of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the percentages of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given table provides information involved in the proportion of cyclists belonging to five
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 groups in one town. It can be clearly seen from the table, that riding a bike was more preferred by female cyclists than male counterparts in all
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 groups.
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 0-9
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 in both genders accounted for by far the highest percentage in all
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 was the opposite with the 40-59
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. We can see more detail from the table,that 0-9 aged children had the percentages of using bicycles with 51.4 % and 50.3% for females and males, respectively. Meanwhile, people aged 40-59 made up the smallest percentages with 12.3% for women and 8.0 % for men. The second highest proportions of bicycle riders were accounted for by people in the 10-17
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, with 24.6 % for males and nearly double the figure for females. over 60
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 cyclists made up 18.5 % and 13.2 % of females and males, respectively. Those who were from 18 to 39 years old accounted for 17.1% of women and 9.7% of men.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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