The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart elaborates on the number of
people
who live in the US in the different categories of yearly salary in three distinct years.
Overall
, it is evident that the earnings of the 75-90 K dollars
Change the noun form
dollar
group
was the smallest group
each year. On the other hand
, the largest group
in 2007 and 2015 was the people
who achieved more than 100kk
Correct your spelling
100k
dollars
.
According to
the chart, the population of US households who earn less than 25 k dollars
was 25 million
in 2007 and it increased to almost 29 million
in 2011 and then
decreased slightly to 28 million
in 2015. The category of individuals with 25-49 thousand dollars
was the same as the previous one and after an approximately 3 million
increase in 2011, it was almost 27 million
in 2015. Regarding the highest income group
, almost 29 million
people
earned it and then
after a brief reduction, the greatest amount of people
earned more than 100k dollars
in 2015.
On the other hand
, the 50-74.9 and 75-99.9 sections allocated the smallest groups. Interestingly, the former group
remained stable in each
three years Change the determiner
every
by
almost 21 Change preposition
with
million
households. Additionally
, the latter had an unremarkable change and it reached 14 to 15 million
between 2007 and 2015.Submitted by farzin_seyednejad on
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