The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.

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The line graph below illustrates the production of paper,

wood

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pulp

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and

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sawn-

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sawn wood

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wood

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in the UK between 1980 and 2000.

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, the production of paper increased over the time period, whilst sawn-

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declined and

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pulp

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remained relatively the same.

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of the time period,

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became the least generated forest industry. Looking at the chart in more detail, in 1980 paper made up the majority of the materials at a figure of 220 million tonnes. Over the next 10

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there was a moderate increase to 250

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before a dramatic rise occurred to 350 million tonnes in 2000.

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Sawn-

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Sawn wood

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actually started off with a higher figure compared to

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a wood

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pulp

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in 1980, the statistics respectively being 200 and 170. Both the materials experienced a slight decline over the next 10 years, equating to a number of 150 in 1990.

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this

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pulp

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gradually increased back to its original

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of 170 in 2000.

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sawn-

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continued to decline and stopped at a figure of 130 in 2000.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.

Government should focus their spending on public services rather than on the arts (e.g music and painting). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that things learned at school are not as useful as before, and there are important skills to learn outside school. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people suggest that social networking and online communication have increased social isolation. In what ways do you think this has happened? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying up-to-date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?