The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.
The line graph below illustrates the production of paper,
wood
pulp
and sawn-
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sawn wood
wood
in the UK between 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the production of paper increased over the time period, whilst sawn- wood
declined and wood
pulp
remained relatively the same. At the end
of the time period, sawn-
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sawn wood
wood
became the least generated forest industry.
Looking at the chart in more detail, in 1980 paper made up the majority of the materials at a figure of 220 million tonnes. Over the next 10 years
there was a moderate increase to 250Add a comma
years,
,
before a dramatic rise occurred to 350 million tonnes in 2000.
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Sawn-
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Sawn wood
wood
actually started off with a higher figure compared to wood
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a wood
the wood
pulp
in 1980, the statistics respectively being 200 and 170. Both the materials experienced a slight decline over the next 10 years, equating to a number of 150 in 1990. After
this
, wood
pulp
gradually increased back to its original statisitic
of 170 in 2000. Correct your spelling
statistic
statistics
Conversely
, sawn-
wood
continued to decline and stopped at a figure of 130 in 2000.Submitted by abeera2012 on
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