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The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.

The line graph below illustrates the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK between 1980 and 2000.
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The line graph below illustrates the production of paper,
wood
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pulp
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 and
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sawn-
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sawn wood
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wood
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 in the UK between 1980 and 2000.
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, the production of paper increased over the time period, whilst sawn-
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 declined and
wood
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pulp
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 remained relatively the same.
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 of the time period,
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sawn wood
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wood
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 became the least generated forest industry. Looking at the chart in more detail, in 1980 paper made up the majority of the materials at a figure of 220 million tonnes. Over the next 10
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 there was a moderate increase to 250
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 before a dramatic rise occurred to 350 million tonnes in 2000.
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Sawn-
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Sawn wood
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wood
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 actually started off with a higher figure compared to
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wood
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a wood
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pulp
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 in 1980, the statistics respectively being 200 and 170. Both the materials experienced a slight decline over the next 10 years, equating to a number of 150 in 1990.
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this
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,
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pulp
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 gradually increased back to its original
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statistic
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 of 170 in 2000.
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,
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wood
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 continued to decline and stopped at a figure of 130 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wood, pulp, sawn-wood with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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