You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
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The chart illustrates the proportion of
time
activities that were spent by mature people in a state in 1958 and 2008. Overall
, there are six categories of spending time
which the working activity was the most popular one.
In 1858, many adults were spending the majority of their time
at
working with 33%. Sleeping Change preposition
apply
time
was also
hight
at 32%, compared to the lowest that can be seen in Correct your spelling
high
traveling
to work at just 2%. People who decided to go out with their Change the spelling
travelling
friend
or family were Fix the agreement mistake
friends
being
the third trending on leisure Unnecessary verb
apply
time
at 19%. Moreover
, other interests or playing sports and relaxing at home was
counted just under 10%.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
On
the Change preposition
In
another
year, in 2008, killing Correct quantifier usage
other
time
on working became more popular (42%) compared to the first year given. Additionally
, sleeping and relaxing at home were 25% and 13% respectively. The others
three categories can be seen Correct quantifier usage
other
just
under 10% where going out was the lowest (6%).Change preposition
as just
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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