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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table provides detailed statistics on how
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unemployed people spent their
time
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 in the UK
last
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 year divided into 14 categories between the two genders.
Overall
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, it could be considered that housework by women in the morning had consistently the highest percentage over the period
while
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 the number of staying in bed females in the afternoon was invariably the lowest one.
To begin
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 with, men in the morning spent most of their
time
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 with job hunting by 22%, followed by shopping and gardening.
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, the lowest rate in the morning was drinking with only 2%, followed by nothing sitting around.
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, women at the start of the day do housework by 49% and the lowest
time
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 allocated to drinking and playing sports.
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, males spent their afternoon more frequently gardening and watching TV at 14% and 13%, respectively,
while
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 the lost per cent prefer to stay in bed. Meanwhile, the most
time
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 spent by females in the afternoon was on housework, shopping and eating with friends or relatives.
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, similar to males, playing sports and staying in bed were the least activities.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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