The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates a comparison of the average
retirement
in six countries divided by two sexes in 2003.
Overall
, it could be seen that the retirement
age
of men was higher than the age
of women in six nations. Moreover
, Korea was the country having the highest retirement
age
, while
the opposite was true in France.
To begin
with, there were four countries with the levels of retirement
age
over 60 years
. In detail, the longest duration was in Korean, which was 68 years
and 8 months
for males and 18 months
shorter for females. The mentioned age
in Japan was slightly lower than the retirement
age
in Italy by one year. Besides
, the other nations recorded an insignificant difference in the average retirement
age
including Australia and the UK, with around 63 to 64 years
, roughly 64 to 65 years
, respectively.
On the contrary
, Italy and France were countries showing a retirement
age
of under 60 years
. In particular
, the average retirement
age
of Italian males and females was 58 years
, 2 months
and 57 years
, 3 months
, respectively. France recorded the lowest age
of retirement
, with 57 years
and 4 months
for men and 56 years
and 9 months
for women.Submitted by phuonglinhlp.0900 on
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