The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates a comparison of the average
retirement
in six countries divided by two sexes in 2003.
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Overall
, it could be seen that the Linking Words
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age
of men was higher than the Use synonyms
age
of women in six nations. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Korea was the country having the highest Linking Words
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while
the opposite was true in France.
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To begin
with, there were four countries with the levels of Linking Words
retirement
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age
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years
. In detail, the longest duration was in Korean, which was 68 Use synonyms
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for males and 18 Use synonyms
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shorter for females. The mentioned Use synonyms
age
in Japan was slightly lower than the Use synonyms
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in Italy by one year. Use synonyms
Besides
, the other nations recorded an insignificant difference in the average Linking Words
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including Australia and the UK, with around 63 to 64 Use synonyms
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, respectively.
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On the contrary
, Italy and France were countries showing a Linking Words
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age
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In particular
, the average Linking Words
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age
of Italian males and females was 58 Use synonyms
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and 57 Use synonyms
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months
, respectively. France recorded the lowest Use synonyms
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for men and 56 Use synonyms
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for women.Use synonyms
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