The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The graph compares the regularity of
exercises
which was done by Australian males and females who were in various
age
brackets within a year,2010, which is reported in proportion.
Overall
, it is explicit that
women
were more active in comparison with men almost in any
age
except between 15 and 24.
Moreover
,
women
who were in their middle ages, 45 to 54 stuck to their
exercises
more than other
age
groups. Regarding
women
, what stands out from the scheme is that roughly half of the female society did physical
exercises
at various ages. In more detail, the most active
age
cohort for
women
was 45 to 54, when 53.3% of them commonly did
exercises
.
However
, the elderly and youngsters were on the same level, a bit less than 50 per cent of them engaged in doing exercise; 47.1 per cent and 47.7 respectively. Focusing on men, it can be seen that only in the youth era females were less active than males with a minor difference, 5.1%.
Furthermore
, just 39.5% of men did some activities regularly;
whereas
this
percentage reached nearly 47 per cent for the oldest bunch.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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