The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.
The tables provide data about the
consumption
and production
of potatoes
in South and Central America
, Africa, North America
, Europe
and Asia
in 2006.
Overall
, in 2006 the highest consumption
rate
of potatoes
had
Verb problem
was in
Europe
, whereas
, the highest production
rate
of
Change preposition
for
potatoes
had
Verb problem
was in
Asia
.
The highest consumption
rate
of potatoes
in 2006 had
Verb problem
was in
Europe
with 96.1 kg
per person
. The consumption
rates of potatoes
in Asia
and South and Central America
was
quite similar. The Correct subject-verb agreement
were
consumption
rate
of potatoes
in Asia
was 25,8 kg
per person
and the consumption
rate
of potatoes
in South and Central America
was 23,6 kg
per person
. The lowest consumption
rate
of potatoes
compared to others had
Africa(14,1kg per Verb problem
was in
person
)
The highest production
rate
of potatoes
in 2006 had
Verb problem
was in
Asia
with 131.2 million
tonnes
. Europe
produced 126.3 million
tonnes
of potatoes
in 2006. North America
produced 24.7 million
tonnes
of potatoes
. Africa just produced 16.4 million
tonnes
of potatoes
. The lowest production
rate
of potatoes
in 2006 had
South and Central Verb problem
was in
America
. The production
rate
was 15.6 million
tonnes
.Submitted by tmargaryan2006 on
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