The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts provide data about how working adults in a particular country spent their
time
on different activities during weekdays in 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, In both years, the main activities were working and sleeping.
In 1958, adults devoted almost equal time
to working (33%) and sleeping (32%). However
, by 2008, the proportion of time
spent working increased to 42%, whereas
sleeping decreased by 8%. Notably, the time
spent going out saw a significant decline, dropping from 19% in 1958 to 6% in 2008.
Over the 50-year period, there was an increase in the time
spent relaxing at home, it rose by 5% to reach 13% in 2008. Travelling to work also
showed a notable change, increasing from 2% in 1958 to 8% in 2008. The time
allocated to other interests or playing sports did not have huge
change it had a minor change, going from 6% to 8% between 1958 and 2008.Correct article usage
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