The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of time spent by working adults

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various activities in a specific nation with respect to two different years, 1958 and 2008.

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, the percentage of total hours spent for working

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increased quite significantly over around 5 decades period.

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phenomenon seems to

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correlate with several other activities,

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in the proportion of time used for sleeping and going out with friends or family.

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, other things that were routinely done were increased in terms of its percentage, like relaxing at home,

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to work, and playing sports or other interests. For more detailed information, the proportion of working rose from 33% in 1958 to 42% in 2008.

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to that, the percentage of young

workers

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time spent

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relaxing at home and

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to work

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grew. The former increased by 6% and the latter by 5% during

50 years

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the 50-year

period examined. There

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decreased

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sleeping by 7 % and going out with family or friends by 13% respectively.